"Hurt" Found poetry
"Hurt"
Yes, I forgive you
but I don't want to
Go for a walk in the woods
good place to start.
In ELA, we learned about Spine and Found poetry. Above is my found poem, "Hurt".
The narrator is talking to their (what used to be) friend. He wants to end a friendship with another person but wants to tell them that they forgive them and that they should go along different paths.
The narrator tells their used-to-be friend that they forgive them, but on the inside, they don't really, He says it for both of them. He tells his friend to go take a walk in the woods to think about their other relationships.
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Nice poem, it’s concise and makes you wonder how the person wronged the other person?
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DeleteI really liked your poem because it’s has a lot of meaning in few words. I also though about the woods in the same way you did. Overall I think that your poem was really good and that you conveyed the message well.
ReplyDeleteI was confused at first but then I saw your italics and I thought it was a really cool way of making the poem. I also like how it shows that even though someone may say something they could be thinking the opposite, or something else. Great job.
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